Make sure to read part 1 and part 2 first and eventually we will have more parts but for now this is it!

CHAPTER 2

I woke up to find myself in a hospital bed with a male doctor leaning over him.

“Hey, are you feeling okay?” he asked “You took a pretty bad cut to your eye.”

“What? How bad is it? Will I be okay? Where’s my family?”  I questioned.

“Um… your family is outside, and here’s a mirror. See for yourself.” he handed me the mirror.

“Hey, that looks pretty…AHHHHH!!!! What the heck is that?” I screamed as the doctor lifted up a jar of water with a cylinder inside.

“This is your eye,” the doctor said calmly “The one you have in now is just an artificial one, you don’t ever need to take it out unless you want to, but you can’t see out of it. Would you like to see your eye?”

“Um…no thanks, it looks all bloodshot. Oh and can I see my family for a while? Alone?” I asked.

“Yes, I’ll send them in.” he said then left. A few moments later, my family came in. my mother looked tear streaked, and my dad looked like he was holding in tears and Sammy was holding his teddy bear.

“Are you ok, Quinten?” Sammy asked “I’m sorry. Did you see your eye?” Then he set my eye in my lap.

“Guys? Can I have a little talk with Sammy alone” I asked. My parents nodded and left, shutting the door behind them.

Sammy and I were brothers. We were not the best of brothers, though. Sammy annoys the snot out me. I pin Sammy to the floor and make him cry. We have many things against each other. We don’t hate each other, but we don’t love each other. It is just a “buddy” kind of relationship. And this was one more thing I had against Sammy.

“Do you see what you did? You shot my left eye out! I have an artificial eye! I won’t ever be able to see out of it!” I said angrily “You are always hurting me! But this time you have gone too far! I hate you! I wish you were never born!”

At this Sammy walked out of the door miserably, pouting on the way. When he got out there, a shimmer in the air appeared, a cloaked figure jumped out, grabbed Sammy, and jumped back in. On impulse, I jumped out of bed, cords and sticky pads flying, and dove through the shimmer in the air to get my brother back, before I knew what I was doing.

I jumped through the shimmer and for a moment, everything was blue with tinges of purple. It looked just how I imagined a wormhole, but softer. But it was only for an instant. The next moment I was cast out onto rocky ground and rolled along for a second. I looked up and saw the cloaked figure holding Sammy, who was crying, teddy bear dangling limply in his arms. The cloaked man was running away. I jumped up and bounded after him. I still had on my t-shirt and jeans with my air-soft pistol in my back pocket. I kept running after Sammy until I twisted my ankle on a rock and fell down.

In a minute, I saw the doctor from the hospital. I must be hallucinating, or was I dreaming? I pinched myself and realized it hurt very badly. The doctor was shaking me now mumbling something that he couldn’t understand. In another second, I was being hoisted up and carried away. The doctor put some sort of rag on my face and that was the last thing I could remember. The nightmare was ending.

One Response to “Story Part 3”
  1. Dana says:

    lol i love it very creative!!

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